Try this as a more simple solution. Just insert your multi select field into the first line
var text CombinedText = ToText([My Text Concatenation Field for Child names]);
var text ConvertToVerticalListWithBullets=
Trim(SearchAndReplace($CombinedText, " ; ","<br>•")); // separate entries with a new line and a bullet
If($ConvertToVerticalListWithBullets<>"", "•") // this is a bullet for the first entry
&
$ConvertToVerticalListWithBullets
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Mark Shnier (YQC)
mark.shnier@gmail.com
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